Age/Gender: 15, Female
Location: Hell
Job: Flash Artist/Guitar
I am an aspiring Flash artist and will be posting things on here such as short animations and music If I can ever compose it. I play guitar as well as do art, so expect both from me sometime.
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Well the animation wasn't too bad, but it was pretty simplistic. You had good sync with the audio and the SE, but the SE was too loud to the music. As well, the ending was kind of abrupt; it was too quickly brought on. If you extend this, add more detail and maybe a plot, maybe it could be a really good animation!
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Well, ALL choices of music really! This is great - Great and unique animation style, awesome humor, and amazing use of internet puns. The only complaint I have is the audio levels are a little unjust, such as when it switches to music it gets a lot louder, or when they're on the missile and screaming, it's really low. Maybe for your next work try to make it all one sound level so I don't have to keep turning up and down my speakers. :)
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I gave it a one because of these factors:
A) It's not animated well. It has fuzzy marks all over the animation and is blurry. As well the speech bubbles are very primitive and kind of bothersome. Makes it look more like the movie was rushed.
B) Bad quality sounds/music. The music was very low quality and was hurtful to the ears most of the time, even when playing Before I forget, which I KNOW you can find/get good quality versions of songs.
C) not a lot of humor, but I see where you were going with it. The humor also lies with the animations most of the time, so by having careless animation you have not the best humor, though the Giddy Mario did make me chuckle a little, despite. If you are to re-do this, I'd suggest better animation (No white spots around the sprites), possibly hand animating this if you are an artist, and of course, selecting better quality music (The song choices themselves were alright, though)
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"Jackie stole 69 cents out of a dead guy's pocket...She'd be proud" Totally made my day haha~ Funny stuff.
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Well, He DID get his 1-Up! I guess bowser now knows Mario's weakness? XD Well done. I really liked it.
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Well, for being put together rather quickly, it is something fun to mess around with to pass time. As well, you can just hold left click and win if you a cheater lol.
Sadly, there were a few programming errors I think, with the music not playing. If your planning to make another one, I'd definitely fix that, but great job anyways.
Author's Response:
im making a second version so i'll work on that
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